You showed up on my bedroom shutters,
with a light and playful, pitter-patter,
a zillion, tiny, drops of drizzle
delighting in a dewy dance.
Eyes closed, body still, I keenly listened,
to your hypnotic, steady, soothing rhythm,
and when the misty music suddenly ended,
I had fallen into a dreamy trance.
Morning,
your mood today is dark and lazy,
despite dawn's debut of rainy energy,
so, until the sun dries up your puddles,
I'll stay warm and snug in my cocoon covers.
Inspired by this morning's mizzle,
written for Poets United, Midweek Motif
Cocoon covers! Nice, especially on a rainy day.
ReplyDeleteWe don`t get many such days, here, on the island, so when they do occur, they are always greeted with a smile.
DeleteAh, I'll remind myself of your delight in a drizzly morning when we get into the rainy period forecast later in the week. Maybe I'll even cocoon under the covers for a sleep-in, if BreeBree and James Mason will let me, and wait to be energized when the sun returns. Now I'm yawning, Poppy dear! Your lines are making me long for the coming rainy days ahead.
ReplyDeleteI know how much you love autumn, rainy days and all, and you must be especially cozy, with your fur babies cuddled next to you.
DeletePoppy! It is so good to see you popping in again. Smiles. I love your morning.........it is always lovely to move slowly as the day begins.......I enjoy that so much, after all the years of working and rushing.
ReplyDeleteEvery morning should be a `lie-in` type of morning, where one can linger in the luxury of not having to rush out to work, in retirement, right?:)
DeleteI loved your cozy glimpse of a rainy morning, my Poppy.. Sunny days are always uplifting, no doubt. But there can be something entrancing about a rainy day as well..
ReplyDeleteXoxoxo
Thank you, my darling daughter!
DeleteDefinitely, like more time to dream!
xoxo
So, so Lovely to see you here Poppy! And with such a beautiful Morning poem. Sometimes I don't mind a dark and lazy morning :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana.:)
DeleteAnd when our mood mimics Mother Nature's, well, we know we're in good company!;))
Lovely, lovely poem!
ReplyDelete"until the sun dries up your puddles,/I'll stay warm and snug in my cocoon covers"
can't think of a better thing to do on a dark and lazy morning. :-)
Thank you, so much, Khaya!:)
DeleteThe rain definitely inspires coziness!
I like the pace and rhythm of your poem, Poppy, and the sounds in the first stanza are delightful. The denouement is so well done – it made me want to go back to bed!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kim!:)
DeleteRainy days certainly more rest and relaxation.
It's always beautiful waking up in the warmth of the covers with the sound of a light drizzle on the window ledge. I love how you portrayed the trance it brings about in its peaceful quality. Also, the final stanza is so very sweet. I really liked this verse!
ReplyDelete-HA
Thank you, Anmol.:)
DeleteThat light, staccato drip-drop of the rain against the window or the shutters is one of my favourite sounds.
Warm and under the covers sounds good to me!
ReplyDeleteLove the image of those cocoon covers! Gorgeous write ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sanaa.:)
DeletePoppy, your poem captured for me everything that is so soothing and restorative, as well as enchanting, about those good (versus bad) rainy days.
ReplyDeleteThank you, so much!:)
DeleteYes, I totally agree: rain is so restorative.
rainy always make me lazy too...
ReplyDeletesuch a wonderful poem.
have a great day
Thank you so much!:)
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ReplyDeleteA good one.
ReplyDeleteLong time no posts?
Thank you. Unfortunately, have not been inspired to write poems for a while, but my love of photography has, for the time, provided me with my creative fix, over on Instagram, where I write captions for my pics.
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